2008年9月19日 星期五

一仁L01單字造句佳作

A Scary Tale 一仁33 謝依衡 m. m.

One day, everyone fell asleep. In the dark and messy corner, there is something waiting for its meal. It’s eager to have some blood……

Like every teenager, I’m a common student, so I locked my room’s door, and put on the earphones. Now,everything is ready. I took out my comic book and started to enjoy the great time. But just then, I was disturbed by some stupid noise. “Oh! What a stupid mosquito!”When I just said it, a finger fell on the mosquito with very strong power--then it was dead. That’s why people called me “The God's Hand of Killing Mosquito”.

Teacherfrog:
Very creative. I like the opening most. You do know how to create a sense of suspense.

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Father and Son 一仁14 胡獻文 Big David

My father always enter my private room and open my drawer since I was two years ago. I think he doesn’t respect me at all. So I find some time to talk with him. But his explanation is that my desk was too messy. He wanted to tidy it up for me. But I want to have a private place of my own, so I make a deal with my father –I don’t want him to always touch my things and I promise I will clean up my bedroom by myself and he will not enter my bedroom without being allowed.

Teacherfrog:
A very clever design. You combine the two problems in the textbook, which allows you to put in many new words.



My Life in Junior High 一仁3 何柏謙 River

When I was in a private junior high school, the life there was filled with pressure. For example,we had to be good in our schoolwork. In our class, it was very common that the drawers were full of books. After lunch, the school allowed us to take a thirty-minute break. At the time, nobody was awake. Everyone was very tired, and teachers always said, “Be a hard-working student, and you’ll go to a good senior high school. At last, you’ll go to a good college.” After the BC Test, everyone went to a good senior high school. Three years later, I hope that my classmates can go to a good college!

Teacherfrog:
Yes, this is what I called a “true, personal, touching” story. To be able to express your life experiences with the newly learned words is one major purpose of this assignment. Good job!



My New Class 一仁24 馮信維 Ice Horse

1) After I entered senior high school, I think the schoolwork is more interesting than junior high school. Especially English is the funnest, like LIVE magazines and sentence-making. I also respect English teacher. Although he doesn’t speak English well, he tries his best to explain every word in class. I think it’s an excellent example to show yourself. I will be able to enter a good college by following teacher’s lead.

2) When I got into our classroom for the first time, I thought wow that’s terrible. It’s untidy and messy. But our teacher gives us some advice on how to clean up the classroom. After one day, the classroom isn’t as untidy as a garbage heap.

Teacherfrog:
Well, you can certainly make a good diplomat in the future. I am pleased. ^_^ , and I believe your homeroom teacher is, too.



Schoolwork Isn't Everything 一仁29 蔡坤易 Mr. Queen

1) Parents in Taiwan usually place a lot of pressure on their children’s academic performance. They think that as students, all we need to do is study hard and get into a good college. However, I think that we also need some free time to cultivate our hobbies. They do it for our own good, making it hard to explain to them how we feel. I hope that one day they can understand that, in life, fun is as important as hard work.

2) You should take a more enthusiastic attitude toward your schoolwork.

3) Although Chris was very tired, he still tried to stay awake in order to meet the deadline.

Teacherfrog:
The Queen's English is surely good. I bet you write better than many of the senior students in our school. Your writing shows your spirit of independence.



A Secret Meeting一仁17 曹育瑞 Ray

1) The mice are having a private meeting in my messy drawer.

2) Having a lot of schoolwork and pressure is very common in college.

Teacherfrog:When I saw the first sentence, I couldn't help laughing. The image is so interesting!


The Drawer一仁15 唐劭樺 Jesus

A drawer which can be locked can give you more privacy, and you can also keep your desk tidy,not messy.

Teacherfrog:
You put the new words and sentence patterns into one beautiful and meaningful sentence. Well done!

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  2. 哦哦哦哦哦哦(?

    快吧很棒很棒大家來留言吧(被拖走...


    菜淇淋

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  3. (一仁1號 - -)





    慧玲老師說:好文推推推XD

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  4. 大家都寫的好好啦
    我完全不能比
    有內容豐富的還有簡短有力的
    讚啦!!!!
    一仁18莊子儀

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  5. 信為兄真棒





    一仁25號

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  6. 哈柔
    不錯哦 !

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  7. 大家的作文真棒!加油!

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  8. 蔡坤易你寫的文法我都看不懂果然頗強的XD
    還有你的字太所以有些字是我亂打的說不定有打錯這樣"
    反正很棒XDD
    高一仁15號 留!

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  9. queen 寫下台灣小孩的真實寫作 內容及家令我產生共鳴 ice horse 寫下的雖然不認同但是 他的文章擲得讓我好好的觀摩學習 高一仁23陳鋌泓

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  10. ㄨㄚˊ~
    大家的造句都很優~
    一仁太優秀了~
    踢球富拉格 還說一義怎樣怎樣~
    一仁就是型男班!沒什麼好辯論的>"<

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  11. TO 一仁14 胡獻文 Big David

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  12. very good good good good good good

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  13. 1仁37號。李運強2008年9月19日 上午8:50

    加油。。好嗎?

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  14. ㄟ...大家都寫的非常好!!!
    very good!!





    一仁28號

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  15. very good good good good good
    good~~ 好到不能再說ㄌ 一仁 35

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  16. 英文真好
    一仁05汪柏叡

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  17. 我是一仁10號林沅霆,蔡坤易write so good use so much grammer

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  18. 我是一仁19許弘諺
    A Scary Tale
    這篇還不錯,不過有點短,打長一點會更好看0.0

    Father and Son
    Well,your writing thuch my heart,
    I sometimes have the same felling.

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  19. 一仁一定強!
    one person is strong

    33 mm

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  20. very good
    能進這入所高中的人
    果真都有實力

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  21. │\__╭╭╭╭╭__/│
    │           │ ╭───╮
    │           │ │GOOD!│ 
    │ >       < │ ╰───╯
    │≡  ╰┬┬┬╯  ≡│O
    │    ╰─╯    │
    ╰──┬O───O┬──╯

    一仁8號

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  22. 謝依衡,有創意的蚊子故事,呼嚕嚕好厲害厲害,佩服佩服,要是我一定寫不出=3=,我得加油囉!you are so good.better.best






    俺是一仁17號曹育瑞

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  23. HALLO!

    Good job!

    1仁 26 號

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  24. OH~DAMN
    I'M PROUD OF U~
    一仁IS BEST~

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  25. 一仁14 胡獻文 Big David
    Your answer is good.
    That is every teenager will have problem.
    That is good example

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  26. They are the best sentences in our class,but it too long to read so more.putputput





    一仁21郭祐華

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  27. 大家都寫的好好 我自卑了
    一仁6號

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  28. good





    QQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQQ

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  29. 你.....把我推倒了==...

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  30. 我是藝人14
    坤易兄 雖然我的文章
    也被po在上面
    但我仍然深深感到

    比不上
    你太厲害了

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  31. The frist one is so fun.Mosquito is
    so secret at the frist.
    BY一仁十二號邱仲安

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  32. 每個都寫這麼好是怎樣
    還不快點交我





    惠玲老師說:GOOD

    一仁31

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